IELTS Writing
IELTS Writing – Parents and Children

IELTS Writing – Parents and Children

IELTS Writing Task  2 – Academic

Prompt:

Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?(教育)

IELTS Writing – Parents and Children 教育

Introduction

Children who grow up in an environment where they always get what they want and can do as they please often face disappointment in adulthood. These spoiled individuals may come to resent those who reject them and might eventually harm themselves.

Body 1

Parents who provide everything for their children often believe they are benefiting them. However, this can negatively impact their children’s outlook on life. Children who never experience rejection struggle to cope with it from others, leading to problematic behavior. For instance, children who throw tantrums when they don’t get their way might continue this behavior into adulthood. It’s common to see people on social media reacting poorly when reprimanded, reflecting their lack of experience with rejection during their youth. Asadults, this behavior is considered unacceptable and can lead to further rejection, fewer opportunities for work or relationships, and social isolation.

Body 2

Children who are allowed to do whatever they want, without guidance or limits, may develop a tendency to engage in increasingly risky activities. This is often visible on social media, where children perform dangerous stunts without consequences. As they grow older, this behavior might continue, potentially leading to illegal actions, legal troubles, or even fatal accidents. Allowing a child to act without boundaries can foster a mindset that leads to their downfall as they age.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while letting young children do as they please might seem harmless, if not controlled, it can have serious consequences. It can alter their behavior, cause harm to others, and result in societal rejection


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